TLC by Chrouya
Script:	 Hentai Ouji 02 [timed][edited]
Workraw: Hentai Ouji 02 [WR]

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July 2nd. Sunny, then cloudy.
July 2nd. Sunny, followed by clouds.
{sounds more forecast}

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I doodle on her stomach while she sleeps.
I doodle on her stomach so she won't catch a cold while sleeping.
{nebie no kiken no tame: due to the dangers of catching a cold while sleeping}

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A commemorative picture of Ponpoka the Raccoon, saved!
A commemorative picture of Pom Poko the Raccoon Dog, saved!
{http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pom_Poko}

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"I will never mess with your navel again".
"I will never toy with your navel again".
{sounds more surprising to the bystanders}

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That was pretty harsh.
W-What a vicious tongue.
{you see, I keep it literal}

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I came all the way to the next town looking for advice. {tlc - tense especially}
I've come all the way to the neighboring town for advice.
{I think present perfect is the best tense here}

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She took my facade. I'm not going to let her keep it!
She took my facade and I'm not going to let her keep it!
{I wouldn't split the line}

SIGN 0{the brown characters}
Japanese-style {#Yeah, I start line numbers from zero. Programmers banzai!}
Wafu Mofu
SIGN 1{white characters}
Animal Cafe
{despite the name, they still imply wafuu as in Japanese-style}
SIGN Menu --> see abovementioned

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Maybe I should hang a poster of her in her animal maid costume from the roof,
Maybe I should drop lots of pictures  of her with the animal maids from the roof,
{tareru: dropping in this context, or else the roof makes no sense}
{I don't hear costume, so I presume the other maids (he says "with animal maids")}

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So this is the 'moment of love' I've heard about?
So this is one of the infamous... love hotels?!
{rabuho = Love hotel}

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I thought we were going in, so I had some naughty expectations. {#'weird' if you prefer that over 'naughty'}
{good as is}

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You wanna die?
I'll make you pay for this!
{I don't know, this feels way too brute}

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Get lost and stay away! {TLC, since tobi said to leave it to you, but I had to offer an suggestion.}
{http://dic.nicovideo.jp/a/%E3%82%82%E3%81%92%E3%82%8D}
{The above site pretty much explains in what situation mogero is used, and I think this suggestion is fine for the type of guy he is.}
{-- you only say this to people having a successful life, haha --}
{I guess this could actually phrase as piss off and die}

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Like a borrowed cat.
{perhaps you would just get rid of this joke and put in the liberal translation of quiet and meek here}
{or maybe: As meek as a lamb.} --> Just adding more animals to this series.

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When she plays around with the pet dog during her work, she is able to feel the simple pleasures of life.
When she plays around with a pet dog in front of the gate, she is able to feel the simple pleasures of life.
{haitakusaki: in front of an empty house}

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She lives in a regular apartment in a four-story building, where no pets allowed.
She lives in a regular apartment in a four-story building, where no pets are allowed.

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"My breasts might be tiny, but I have a dream as large as my dad's hot-air balloon!
"My breasts might be tiny, but I have a dream as large as a hot-air balloon!
{I don't hear dad anywhere}

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That's what you call stalking, you freaking pervert!
That's what you call stalking, you freaking delusional pervert!
{missed mousou}

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Saturday, then. It's a date.
See you on Saturday, then.
{Doesn't feel like there are two sentences in here. but he does see her probably before that day.}
{she doesn't consider it as a "date" at this point}

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{the text should be lowered or it is within the Japanese text notice}
{goes on for a few lines}

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We're not rabbits who don't spend time courting. {#yeah, stole this from manga. Dunno what it means XD}
We should follow the steps one by one...
{I'll go for literal translation here. dankai wo fumu = following the steps}

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{kodukuri means reproduction {lit. making babies)}

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Geez. He's the worst, womanizing, indecent pervert ever. {#Please add commas as necessary, kthxbai}
Geez. He's the worst, womanizing, indecent pervert ever. But. {#Please add commas as necessary, kthxbai}
{I'd add the but here.}
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But Senpai wouldn't do something like that.
Senpai wouldn't do something like that.

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toriyasukunarimashita {TLC} {Does it mean - Have a go cheaply! or something?}
Now easier to catch!

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Well, it wasn't too bad.
Well, it's not as if it's not fun.
{I think a literal translation portrays her character more}
{It wasn't not fun}

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TL/Editor's Note: Komame is the alternate reading of Azuki. It also means (any implied/slang meaning here?)
{komame is just kun/on, so I don't think there's any hidden meaning}
{komame means "diligent {worker}" }
{literally: little bean}

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Did you make any new friends at your new school?
I wanted to ask if you made any new friends at your new school.
{this is the literal line}


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Next time: Say Something If You're Feeling Sad.
Say Something If You're Feeling Sad.
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Next time: Say Something Say Something Before You Get Sad. 
Say Something Before You Get Sad. 
{before}